the ways i loved you

[angelsaab]

From the first day I loved you

In loving I?ve cared for you

In caring I?ve prayed for you

In praying I?ve shown to you

That my love is all for you

As my love grew in truth so true

Not a day passes without a thought of you

Your face a vivid picture in view.

I cared for you

in every which way

a man can care for a woman

I stroked you tnederly

when you needed to be loved

I wiped your tears

when we fell on hard times

I shared your pain

every which way

but my sincere heart

and passionate love

wasn't good enough for you

You left me

with my heart untended

and here I sit

thinking about

the ways I cared for you

they ways I prayed for you

the way I've shown you my love.

The way I loved

[blakbeauti]

Angelsaab, that was a truly moving poem. 
I'm a writer of poems and songs myself. Below is a poem that i wrote, and I'm thinking of turning it into a chorus of a song. What do you think..?

U fly
I will follow
U cry
I 2 will weep
U sing
I will back u
U die
& I will lay beside u..

[KoolME]

angelsaab the poem is interesting...................

blakbeauti nice poem but the last line is that really a promise one can keep?

[blakbeauti]

HELL NO! Sweetheart, it's just a poem.. Although one can feel like dying if the one they love has gone to the other side.. My poem was just talking about how deep a persons love can be etc, hence me saying that I might turn it into a chorus for a song.. HOWEVER, I aint lying beside anyone who dies period.. not if I can help it anyway..